- The spirituality factor of birth and why it does not occur so strongly in non natural births (according to Vincent)
- Hormones released during birth, Oxytocin and how and why it has been artificially mirrored in the drug 'Pitocin'
- Why doctors constantly change the rules and guidelines, ie. how long you can go overdue
- How a 'perfect' birth can affect the mother in comparison to a 'troubled' one
- The emotional investment comparison between doctors and midwives
4. "Women's bodies have a near perfect knowledge of childbirth; it's when their brains get involved that things can go wrong." -Peggy Vincent
I agree with this quote completley, and think that it perfectly sums up what Vincent is trying to get across in her book. I do not understand the mentality of inducing a pregnant woman if she is a few days overdue, isn't it common sense that the baby will come out when it is ready? I also think that this is the main arguement for natural childbirth. Woman delivered perfectly healthy babies for centuries the natural way before hopsitals and epidurals, so why now do we so desperately need the medical intervention? I think that one aspect of the reliance on hospital care is the terror that is instilled in women in our culture. Pregnant woman are overwhelmed with the horror stories of 'a friend's friend' who had a nightmare during birth, or the home birth gone wrong, rather than filled in on everything from the start.
Amber,
ReplyDeleteYour writing reaches towards college level at several points - the thinking too (integrating ICBTS was refreshing).
A few suggestions:
1. This sentence - "I don't agree with the one size fits all theory, and whilst most of her stories are in the hippie era when the rejuvination of natural birth was erected I think that some women dont want to go through the pain, for there own reasons, and more of this opinion should be explored." - too long, poorly punctuated, and flat. Flat because you don't make any interesting arguments as to WHY someone should include other peoples' opposing perspectives in their own memoir.
2. Page numbers?
3. Independent research to confirm/challenge?
4. Functional MLA?